notes of you - in sleep

[machinery]

more dreams
- images, real
of you - -
sometimes
-waking up believing
it's
still real (why?)
grasping the second pillow
for some kind of truth...

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[machinery]

ahh shit man, why why why,
seriously parch, you or I should approach the adminstrator of hostboard, simply 'cause this damn board won't allow you to space the way you want to...this is supposed to have some indentions & for the last line, each word is supposed to be seperated by five spaces...more feeling I guess.....

Damn board!

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[Trevor Vincent]

I really liked this one...the way you used few words made me focus on each one.
"grasping the second pillow
for some kind of truth..."
This was my favorite part b/c the imagery really allowed me to see what was going on. Made me feel kind of lonely, but that doesn't take away from me liking it...just a personal note.

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[machinery]

thanks man, means a lot....
these were actually a comprisal of notes I was taking for a poem I wanted to write...but after I finished....I looked and skimmed and kind of like the ditty of notes...had this feel, this beat......i just wish the spacing could be present...total different feel...har har...

live deep in the american dream....
oh man what kicks....



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